Misaki the Hedgehog

OMG a colored Picture! 8D lol Sorry. Like I said on the last pic. I'll put Misaki's story here on a colored pic. lol

Misaki's Story~

Misaki started out without a name being a regular mobian Hedgehog who has no memory of her past and or herself. She didn't even know her own name. But before she had forgotten her past her real name was Kimi.
Kimi had the smarts to stay away from Robotroplis and stay in her own villiage with her friends and family. But one day as the day was going well. Robotnik attacked her home and took her family. Kimi hid avoiding getting captured. When the cost was clear she got out of her hiding place and went to Robotroplis to save her family. But unfortanlly she was too late. They and the villiagers were already robotized.
Kimi sobbed abit as she ran off to find help only to be knocked out by a swatbot. The Swatbot carried her away to the holding cells where Charles or as we all know Uncle Chuck saw her getting carried away. He left to alert his nepfew Sonic the Hedgehog. Sonic nodded to his Uncle speeding off into the city to save Kimi.
In the cell Robotnik grinned as he watched the Hedgehog girl wake up. Kimi looked around still dizzy. Robotnik snickered as he earsed her memory with a Memory easer gun. Kimi blinked forgeting everything. Robotnik ordered his Robots to carry Kimi to the Robotizing room.
Once to the Robotizer, Kimi was placed in the tube. Confused on why she was there Kimi looked around. She asked why she was there how she got there and who is she? Robotnik smirked at her and started up the Robotizer robotizing Kimi. She screamed as her flesh was being covered by metal plateing. Sonic got into Robotnik's base. His ears twitched as he heard Kimi's scream. He glared as he sped to the Robotizing room.
Kimi trembled as the metal plating crawled up her stomache. She winced and cried out as the Robotizer neared finish robotizing her. Robotnik laughed in glee but his laughter was soon dead as the power went out.
Kimi fell to her knees all her body but half her face was robotized. She groaned as a shatter of broken glass was heard. The lights came back on showing the female hedgehog was gone. Robotnik screamed in anger.
As for Kimi. She was being carried away by Sonic. Sonic got to his Uncle Chuck as he sat the unconsious Kimi down. Uncle Chuck checked her over surprised to see that she wasn't under Robotnik's control even if she wasn't fully robotized. He looked at Sonic knowing that they need to get Kimi back to Knothole. Sonic nodded and picked her up again as Chuck hugged to Sonic as he sped off back to Knothole.

Once in Knothole. Kimi was still unconsious. She was being checked over by Dr. Quack. Kimi was in a coma for whole week before she finally woke up. During that whole week. Her body somehow replaced itself over the Robotized body with fur. Dr. Quack was shocked to see this and everyone else was surprised that she was still robotized. But Robotnik was doing something new and she was the test subject.
On the day she woke up. She looked around seeing that Sonic Sally Dr. Quack and Uncle Chuck was looking over her. She screamed jumping out of the bed backing away from them. Sally went to her telling her that they were friends. Not foes. The female hedgehog trembled as she watched them. Sally explained what happened to her. When Sally told her that Sonic saved her and she was actully robotized. She started crying.
Sally comforted her and asked her what her name was. Kimi looked up at her confused and said she doesn't have a name. Or remember it. Dr. Quack was concerned and checked her over. He couldn't find anything wrong with her. He frowned and shook his head to Sally. Sally looked worried abit as she turned to the Female hedgehog and asked her if she wanted to stay in KnotHole.
Kimi nodded as Uncle Chuck offered for her to stay with him. Sonic nodded to the idea and said that he and his family have another room that Kimi can sleep in. Sally thought about the idea and agreed to it. Sonic smirked to it and took Kimi to his house where his family was waiting for him.
Sonic interduce Kimi to his Mom, Bernie. His dad, Jules. And his best bud, Miles Tails Prower. They all greeted Kimi but was surprised by her not knowing who she was. And was more shocked to find out that she was robotized. Jules looked to Kimi thinking and said that Kimi would need a name if she was going to stay here. Kimi looked up at him as he thought for a name.
He snaped his fingers as he looked to Kimi. "How bout Misaki? It's means Beatiful Blossom in Japanese"

Kimi now known as Misaki smiled at the named and said she loves it. From there from out. Misaki has been apart of the Hedgehog family and grew really close to her new fond friends. She had become the new Freedom Fighter. Learned how to use and control her new body and defeated alot of Robotnik's plans. But she wishes to know her real life her real past. But she's more happy to what she has now in her life. Misaki the Hedgehog.

Dang that was a long story to write DX Speacilly with all the distractions I have and my frigging Blank Mind. Gah!

Anyways. Crit on both Picture and Story. Or Picture. Or Story. Doesn't matter.